
Umm to begin its obvious that that 'bikini' was made on Paint. But the cover is nice since it's your1st issue,
next time just try to make it look professional! This cover has potential.

Very nice, I can see that you worked hard on this one ^^.Good !

That dress is sooo YUCK! It looks like you made it on paint. I seriously don't like it.It ruined this entire graphic. Everything else looks good.

This looks like a draft. Doesn't deserve to be in your magazine. The fonts are from microsoft word. Some spelling mistakes as well.
Critique it yourself: http://glow-magazine.blogspot.com/
You get :
3 stars.
I hope to see glow magazine getting 4 stars.
2 comments:
wow thnx!!! im almost done my sept/oct mag and posted a spoiler of the next cover!!! i hope it looks better!! :)
it looks really good i posted it on the site as well
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